NinjaLug

A wee song about my deep, secret love for cigarettes.  Even though I quit a while ago.

Rough version - first and only take.

I'd like to know what you guys think.

I know the tambourine is off-beat, so you don't have to mention that. 

Just a little thing I started singing about this girl I've got a crush on, lol

This is not finished or anything, again, because I am trying to incorperate the advice you guys gave me on the track "An Idea", where I was particulary working on improving my vocals.

So any futhur advice based on this is appreciated and let me know what you think.

Thanks bandampers!

Hey so this is a short recording of me singing and playing guitar, obviously.  I'm trying to improve my singing and melody-creating.  Please do not critique the quality, lyrics, shortness of recording, or that sort of thing.  This is by no means a completed song.  I would like critique on my singing in particular.

Thanks!

I'd like to know what people think of this song.  I know I don't quite hit the right notes here and there, but overall how do you like the song?